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Reversal of Gifts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Reversal of Gifts I received two gifts for Christmas this year. I must admit, I was twice surprised. For one was from the soon to be ex and the other a friend with love in his eyes. The first was a strange one though beautiful in thought. Antique light fixtures all made of brass. Hammered design, to place on the porch, the bulbs still attached, Victorian in class. Unusual because he never has cared to finish improvements, before this last year. And now that we're over, he presents to me a gift rather special, that will remain here. The second gift followed, but was not meant for all, inside black lace, wrapped, tissued red. Sensuous, a gift, that I've never before had, as I tried it all on, the blush of me spread. I'd show you a picture, but it's not allowed I've thought about placing it in the adults. But a poem to write, I've a must before then, still wondering if, and of what would result... A reversal of gifts, strange though it seems. when one knows you well, but gifts, not of warm. And the other is twisting my life into dreams. In poems, I write, as my world takes new form. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-10-2002 11:14 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Did you model it for him?  im sure he was hoping you would...hugss~Vic |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A reversal of gifts, strange though it seems. when one knows you well, but gifts, not of warm. And the other is twisting my life into dreams. In poems, I write, as my world takes new form. I relate alot to your gift experience. The dog I write about sometimes was the result of an ex handing me money for my birthday one year and telling me to buy myself something. So, I bought something that knew how to love me. Great write, Maureen! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, yep, I bet he did wished for you to model that! (smiles) This is such a beautiful poem, sweet friend, may your new life be filled with new joy and happiness and gifts of love and rapture forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very nice, Maureen. And I wish you much love and happiness. ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Victoria..of course not, tried it on for myself, partially to see if I could still fit into one. *s * Between you and I, he hope for more than he shall ever receive *s Duncan ...well I don't know about comparing my gift of lingeree with a dog that could return love but it did make me smile *s Thanks for the kind words. Noah...my new life is my old life with a change or two in the making...I can't give up the old entirely at my age *s..besides..ask anyone who knows me, I am stubborn *s. Silver Streak...thank you for the kind wishes *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
men are funny, huh? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny/strange aren't they? I use to think I understood them..or at least one, for over 30 years..how wrong I was !! hugss Maureen |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How did you like the lacey stuff? How did it make you feel? I already know what you thought of the brass fixtures for your house. I'll bet you truly enjoyed both feelings even though you could not fully express them the the givers Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Interloper are you loping in my inters now??? The lacey stuff made me feel too too and yes I can't resist touching it as I pass where it lays..and you have me pegged..I loved both gifts..was surprised by both...and neither my home nor have I worn them yet...that was yet...*s Sometimes I wonder about you, "I".... hugss M |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Geez Maureen! I wasn't comparing the dog to your lingere...lol. I may be blonde but I'm not that dumb. Besides, I doubt he'd hold still long enough for me to get a little lace number on him. lmao |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You just gave me the biggest laugh of my day...thanks a bunch haaa you are very funny, you know? hugss M * and just for fun tonight I think I will try on one of my presents..and no..it's not those brass things..winkin* |
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