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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-10 03:40 AM



Perspective on Hair (Madame Chipmunks!)
By Larry Chadwick


I’ve thought a lot about your hair,
And the request you made for prayer.
For the loss of it would make you bare,
Without it would we still really be fair?

But if you should from your hair depart,
We would know you by your heart.
Which doesn’t change the doubt you face,
Nor help you try all your fears to erase.

So I wondered if this were to be about me,
Without my hair what would I see?
Just the thought of it made me cry,
And now I see your concern and why.

So I’ve changed my mind about your plight,
I’ll be more sensitive and I’ll start tonight.
But you without your hair upon your head,
Sometimes makes me want to laugh instead.

March 10, 2002


This is written on the theory that humor is good medicine. Heaven help me if I'm wrong!

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-10 05:51 AM


larry,

what a cheeky twist at the end!

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2 posted 2002-03-10 08:27 AM



Not only a cheeky twist, but a very chipmunky cheeky scamper into the hallowed halls of laughter, where the best medicine might be found....

something tells me she is going to be very, very glad to see this one!

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3 posted 2002-03-10 08:46 AM


HAHAHAHA Lyra will laugh at this one, and you know Larry, Laughter still is the best medicine. Great write here. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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4 posted 2002-03-10 09:23 AM


Laughter is the best medicine Larry and I am sure Lyra will giggle at this one.  Good write, and it is only hair.  It's what's in the heart that counts.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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5 posted 2002-03-10 12:23 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, you are so sweet, dearest friend, laughter is indeed the best medicine and I know if there is one person who can cheer our dearest Lyra up, it's you! (big hugggssssss) My prayers are with her and her hair, but even without her hair, she will always be our most loving friend to us all, for true beauty lies in the heart! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-10 12:29 PM


Larry

If you were to loose all your hair
and wear your heart on your head, instead
it would be full and silky soft
with the smiles today that you have fed

I know Lyra will love this, as I do.  Hugs!

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7 posted 2002-03-10 01:58 PM


Larry C.  I am sure Lyra will love this...
And I much admire your sensitivity and
compassion...  Thank You..

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8 posted 2002-03-10 04:33 PM


faterider,
Hope I get away with this. Thanks.

Sunshine,
I like your optomism. Guess it was worth the risk!

floria,
I was banking on that theory. Thanks.

Nancy,
That may be but that hair is really important to her right now! Thanks.

Noah,
That indeed was the whole idea!


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9 posted 2002-03-10 04:35 PM


Martie,
I'm sure you are right. Thanks.

Magnus,
Thank you for that.

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10 posted 2002-03-10 07:26 PM



Larry.......thanks for thinking of me, and for understanding.
But you are probably right about the ending.
No one would recognize a chipmunk without it's hair.
If I lose my hair, I'll lose my stripes too...and then I'll look just like any other hairless rodent.  I would look like a rat with cheek pouches.
Thanks for the laugh!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-03-10 09:08 PM


Cute Larry. I’m glad you gave Lyra a little chuckle. And you know, if you do lose your hair, and you ask real nice, she just might let you borrow one of her wigs  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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12 posted 2002-03-11 12:14 PM


Lyra,
It would seem to me that I owe you the thanks for being understanding. ROFL This was so much fun...allbeit a little risky. But I trust you immensely! Bless you dear friend.

Tracey,
Too funny. I've always said if I was supposed to bald it better happen real slow! So I have time to mourn and adjust. ROFL Smartie pants.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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