Lessons in Lovemaking (a sonnet)

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Auguste

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By the sea

0 posted 2002-03-05 02:09 PM

Lessons in Lovemaking

by Michael

Love lowers to a whisper in bed,
words softly spoken and so few said.
Though times may change, this custom’s still true.
Romance dictates certain things we do.

It always starts with a close embrace
and is shared in a warm, cozy place.
For love can paint darkness, shape a nest
and from each, will always seek the best.

Kisses drawn out, as kisses should be.
Why would you rush such tranquility?
Exchanging of breaths, blushing of skin,
yet still not time for them to begin.

Savor each moment and cause it to live.
The night’s still young, you've so much to give.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2002-03-05 02:48 PM

"Kisses drawn out, as kisses should be.
Why would you rush such tranquility?
Exchanging of breaths, blushing of skin,
yet still not time for them to begin.

Savor each moment and cause it to live.
The night’s still young, you've so much to give."

from your pen...wishes are written....
*sigh*
love this Michael

(((hugs)))

Victoria

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2 posted 2002-03-05 04:10 PM

Sounds lovely Michael..a romantic painting in the dark..hugs

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-05 04:16 PM

Michael....wonderfully romantic.
Enjoyed this piece today.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-05 04:38 PM

Oh you did this so nice Auguste, it was softly sensual. love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

rosepetals25

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5 posted 2002-03-05 04:41 PM

Michael,

I love this. So soft and sweet. Well done Michael

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel

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6 posted 2002-03-05 04:44 PM

(sigh) Oh Michael, you are sooooooooo romantic, this is exactly how I dream of loving my dream girl, my sweet Gwenevere, in the future, I want to stare up at the stars with her and slowly feel each breath, every whisper, every sigh, every word from love slips! (big hugggsssss) Your words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
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7 posted 2002-03-07 12:15 PM

Beautifully said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Auguste

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By the sea

8 posted 2002-03-07 12:29 PM

Susan,
Thank you for loving this.  Lovemaking is all too often rushed. *S*

Victoria,
Thank you!  Nice to see you here. *S*

Nancy,
Isn't romance just wonderful?  Thank you and *hugs* back. *S*

Floria,
I appreciate that, thank you!  Romance is sensual, don't you think?  *S*

Tara,
Then you may have it. *S*  Give it to Dave. LOL!  Seriously, thank you!

Noah,
Your reply is MUCH more sensual and romantic than this poem of mine.  Some day you'll make a woman very happy, my friend. *S*  Thank you!

Melissa,
Thank you and I'm glad you liked it. *S*

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Tiersdin
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east coast

9 posted 2002-03-08 01:46 AM

Beautiful, Michael, soft as a caress...

~Tier

walker
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10 posted 2002-03-08 05:35 PM

Great lessons, we should always take our time

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-03-08 11:47 PM

You mean we have to take lessons now...ha..ha...these are excellent thoughts...James

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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12 posted 2002-03-09 12:08 PM

Great sonnet, great love poem. I like the way you've described that wonderful moment in the night when magic happens between two lovers. ****Ivy Rose

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England

13 posted 2002-03-10 10:31 PM

this is wonderful, Michael, and so beautiful in thought.....makes me wish that everyone could feel this way......

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!

N orth Carolina Girl
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NC,USA

14 posted 2002-03-11 12:16 PM

Michael,this was beautiful and I loved all the romance in this.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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