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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2002-03-10 01:54 AM

Cupid's Mistake

The sound of regret resonates
into my soul, pain penetrates
for, fate has served me a plate
of romance that's turned to hate.
So, I bite off more than I can chew
choking on the memory of you.
My kiss has no destination
so I face the devastation
of Cupid's procrastination;
I'm another victim of his mistake
as memories of you weep within my ache.

By Melissa P. Monette

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-10 02:02 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your tears, but I know deep down the Cupid will make it up to you and shower you with true love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are always with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2002-03-10 02:43 AM

Melissa, I just love the way you write.

Parker

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-10 10:18 AM

So, I bite off more than I can chew
choking on the memory of you.
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That is one of the coolest play on words
and metaphors I'll see today...
and one of the saddest of impact...
you write it so we feel it Melis.
an achingly powerful write.

Awake again I can't pretend ... and I know I'm alone ...
And so close to the end of the feelings we've known.

~Jackson Browne~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-03-10 10:42 AM

for, fate has served me a plate
of romance that's turned to hate.

I could have written this but you've already done it perfectly!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-03-10 09:36 PM

Yep, I can identify with this one. You've described it well Melissa.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-10 09:38 PM

I'm starting to think cupid should horns instead of wings.
Writing with strength, as always.
Sandra

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

7 posted 2002-03-10 09:56 PM

Destined to ask this question "Why?"
We Poets have got to take the hurt
and all the pain, the left out in the pouring rain and FLY!!!!!!!!!!...mark

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