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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-10 12:39 PM


Twenty Words about Love

Love is
more than
a one hearted
affair.

Love is two hearts
revealing to
each other
how deeply
they care.

JamesLee
March10
2002
LoveIs



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1 posted 2002-03-10 12:42 PM


yes James,
great job!

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2 posted 2002-03-10 01:03 AM


James,

   So simply stated, and so true I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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3 posted 2002-03-10 01:06 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, you awlays write the meaning of love so well, this is absolutely delightful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-10 05:01 PM


JM...YES it is...Nicely done...
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5 posted 2002-03-10 07:55 PM


James, and again you say so much in a few words. Why can't I do that? Because I am a woman. LOL....floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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6 posted 2002-03-10 08:11 PM


James!  This is beautiful!  I love it..and you did it in 20 words...sometimes less is more.  Good write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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7 posted 2002-03-10 08:29 PM



Now, this is simple beauty   Well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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8 posted 2002-03-10 09:04 PM


Well done! Thanks for the read!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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9 posted 2002-03-10 09:33 PM


This is how love should be
no lonliness for you or me.

Sandra

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10 posted 2002-03-10 09:51 PM


VERY, VERY NICE!!!  You said so very much about love with so few words.  ***Ivy Rose
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