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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-03-10 09:01 PM


A beautiful garden

"Now the Lord God had planted a garden in the east, in Eden;
and there he put the man he had formed." NIV Genesis 2:8

Let it all go!
Give me your sorrow
Give my your pain
I need your rain.

My garden soil
As flowers toil
need your sweet tears
To grow more cheer.

So when you're sad
Just feeling bad
Please shower me
My love is free.

Let us now fuse
Your lonesome blues
Two as one, soul
Into love's whole.

In a beautiful garden.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
March 10, 2002

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1 posted 2002-03-10 09:20 PM


I dont' know what to say to this other than I like it!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-03-10 09:45 PM


Thank you Skyfire. 'Twas written for a special friend who needed a bit of cheer. Thanks for liking it.

((Skyfire))
-newell

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3 posted 2002-03-10 09:45 PM


Yes, this is a beautiful and hopeful poem
Sandra

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-03-10 09:47 PM


Thank you, Sandra. I'm glad you like it.

((Sandra))
-newell

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