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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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teetering on the edge of the precipice—unclear about the best route to take and with no clear consensus—sits several works I’ve written scheduled to implement various aspects of other competitions this coming facade as one cannot copyright such style any more than Shakespeare could & so when I see something written in the old English font I’m immediately drawn into that mode of expectations and after accessing the damage from my summer schedule and the unexpected draught plus uncertain about restructuring my free-lance approach has prompted my attitude to shy away even further from publicizing my self the art hasn’t changed much if any but the elements & contents have taken a somewhat different twist of fate in that I’m endeavoring to write more of deep felt feelings and emotions that are overlapping the other such content is meant to trigger one’s reminisce or sentiment delving into not only the lonely but the tender in an effort to exhibit the harsh but cozy interior of ones own soul & influence or bring out the caring people have for each other & what’s flowing through such spirits not that I would attempt explaining what any should pursue or do as it is my silent manner to yet remain elegant & urbane . [This message has been edited by lucky (03-09-2002 07:53 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale Is this the letter you promised me? (just kidding) Elegant and urbane..yes, that fits you, so does lonely and tender. I'm so glad to see you here after such a long time, my friend. Your thoughts are always welcome to me. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Nicely said! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMan ... I feel LUCKY~ You are a welcomed sight for these green Cherokee eyes~ Just received yours and Rosemary's journal ... will enjoy tremendously reading through it ~ Will e-mail you both as soon as I return home, (am off for an extended weekend with my honey)...(yeah, yeah, yeah ... I'll catch you both up with details and photos !)  LOVE YOU BOTH .... Well, shucks ... forgot to mention .... I LOVE the format and content ... AS ALWAYS, Bubba ~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love the serpentine shape of this poem, it kind of resembles how your thoughts tetter and then pull backa again as you are rabling! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dale, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"delving into not only the lonely but the tender in an effort to exhibit the harsh but cozy interior of ones own soul & influence or bring out the caring people have for each other & what’s flowing through such spirits not that I would attempt explaining what any should pursue or do as it is my silent manner to yet remain elegant & urbane" Wow. Profound, and profoundly beautiful. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Elegant and urbane, yes. You, my dear wordmaster, have done it again! |
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