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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Behind the scenes of this love lies a shadow of loneliness Living in an cruel world full of sorrow love dies easily We cope by detachment But the more distance between us the more this love suffers And when loneliness embraces us fully and makes us lose our minds we search for each other and love desperately trying to forget the pain Infusing with love what tears us apart Drowning in passion and being happy if only for a night Our love takes takes us to paradise before descending |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so sad but true, my heart always cries out when I hear of so many lovers broken apart and I just wish that so many more can only ascend rather than fall in tears! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is soooooo emotionally powerful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Our love takes takes us to paradise before descending walker - ahhh, a brief stay in paradise - it is worth a few tears I would say. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bitter sweet, the taste of our tears. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a real feeling....one I have felt... the bitterness and the sweetness... Nicely done Walker...very nicely done... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Precisely why I don't ride roller coasters! Good one, walker. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Walker, you sure do have a great way with words!!! I loved the final verse!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end! |
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