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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-03-09 01:01 PM


As the SEA breezes, I think of the smell of Mistletoe.
And as the Son sets, I see Trillium's brush in my mind.
The month of Marge, we say goodbye to cold air
And embrace the warm breeze.
Irish Rose accompanied by Joyce of spring,
beautiful tinged by the sunlight.
Lying there at the SEA bank,
add to the SEA grace.
Then the day comes to the end, but Midnitesun starts the night chorus,
Painting the wholesome night with verses of beauty.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-09 01:20 PM


How many hugs a day can we give you? Let's SEA....
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2 posted 2002-03-09 01:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always delight my days, just as I know they will delight Susan's and Kacy's and everyone elses! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-03-09 04:00 PM


thanks Midnitesun for the hugs

Noah, glad that you like it. I'm really thankful for you reading my poems. You're such a supportive member of the forum. You always encourage others. I'm glad to know you!

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-03-09 06:12 PM


Eliza,
wonderful tribute and very vivid images.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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with you
5 posted 2002-03-14 10:18 AM


awwwwww
this is WONDERFUL!!!!
you are so sweet!
thank you so much for including me

you rock

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6 posted 2002-03-14 11:03 AM


SweetEliza~
You're a doll !
This is a beautiful outpouring for friends~
*Hugs*
~*MonthOfMarge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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