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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Dim is in the ambience, The mood of spotlighted stance, Focus on a single place Concentration on your face, Your target is before you. With sharpness of Eagle eye The feathered steel dart does fly Closing out the last section Assuring that you will win. The crowd congratulates you. Another round circles round, The boys give a joyous sound, Another game though it’s late Wins the game losing your date The lady leaves without you. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
did I get this one right? A game of darts? Can see this happening. shame to see it sink... M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
The old dart game that my boys loved and played so much. This is nice gloom. Felt like I was pitching one of those things. floria Floria |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts, You are correct, a game of darts, Glad you pulled it from the descent Thank you, Strbbux, Some of the player get really caught up in the game To the exclusion of everything else, (except perhaps another Beer) pleased you enjoyed. Gloom |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
When the bulls eye is on the wall There is no pain. Throw! Miss them all But when the target is a heart Piercing wrong will cause pain to start? ((Gloom)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-08-2002 12:37 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Actually my husband left without me one night, true story! I got a new set of fleets that were working magic for me, and I would not budge! LOL, so this brought back some memories long since buried. I enjoyed this PG. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Played darts once ... If I remember I missed the target all together LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Wow, I never heard the rules behind the game of darts until now, that is quite interesting! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a wonderful expressive poem, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Silver Streak, For the poetic response Thank you, Mysteria, I think that he showed poor judgment, I would have waited and watched with another pint, Pleased you liked my poem. Thank you, Zinsser, I’ve played a few games, lacking skill only a few, Now I just watch. Thank you, Mistletoe Angel Your responses are always a pleasure I’m sure you’d pick the game up quickly If you tried. Gloom |
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