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I Miss You
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I Miss You |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I Miss You By: Noah Eaton 3/7/02 These last few days I have realized how hard it feels To miss you, though I am proud of myself for crying for you I have been terribly lovesick, it seems so hard to improvise My world just doesn't feel the same when you are far from me I miss you, my love I miss you, my love I miss you, my love I got resigned from hearing your Muse temporarily I can't help but cry every night I fall asleep while you've been busy I suppose I just love you too much, I just want to see your name on Passions Talk to you on instant-message, tell you how uch I dream to kiss your lips I miss you, my love I miss you, my love I miss you, my love Now I know how you felt While I was in vacation in Florida last Thanksgiving I have cried a lot while you've been away Although I'm proud I do Knowing that I love you so much just as you love me And for the love of you, each tear I cry is a reminder of how much you mean to me These last few days I have been yearning for the summer And how I may hold you close and share loves first kiss with you While you've been away, when I hear your favorite songs I hear a metronome of your heartbeat to mine that makes me yearn to hold you close I miss you, my love I miss you, my love I miss you, my love I can't help it I can't help it I can't help it I need your love... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-07-2002 09:11 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I hope you hear from your Joanna soon hon..hugss....  ~Vic |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Take good care my friend. ThisDiamond |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Dear Noah~ The depth of the ache promises the same measure of joy upon her return... how sweet your passion and lovely your prose. *hugs* Indigo |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy this is outstanding writing, so utterly real, the flow is perfect, utterly divine. Your ache for Joanna in this is so clear, I can feel it throbbing through your words darling boy. She’ll be with you soon, you know there within your heart darling boy. But oh I know how this feels, it hurts, and it hurts sooooooooo much. Reach within your heart darling boy she’s there I know it I Do I love this poem? You KNOW I do. Perfect writing darling boy utterly perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hang in there, Noah...she'll be back soon. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, hang in there. Maybe she'll read this. Good work. |
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