Open Poetry #19 |
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Valentine Be Mine ... a sonnet |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
![]() ![]() The cold wind blows this night with lonely sighs And winters grip holds dear this wondrous land But I do wish in haste these days rush by For warmth of heart will glow with hand in hand; A week or more this dream within your arms And nerves long gone help not to dare this wish My trust to fate that love waits from afar And you the gift of cupids arrows Kiss; Although I try to hold this dream in check Determined I will fly where palm winds blow And nothing, save a crash and tragic wreck Will deny me, this need this want this goal. Till then I’ll sing the songs of wintertime If you my love would be my valentine. James Parker Haley Feb 14, 2002 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful gift you've given... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The cold wind blows this night with lonely sighs And winters grip holds dear this wondrous land But I do wish in haste these days rush by For warmth of heart will glow with hand in hand; A week or more this dream within your arms And nerves long gone help not to dare this wish My trust to fate that love waits from afar And you the gift of cupids arrows Kiss; =========================================== This is indeed lovely P-man... yes..."throw caution in to the wind" isnt that how you said it, Im sure it was poetry no matter ROFL ![]() anyway...YES ... deliver the kiss in person..waaay better than flowers ![]() beautiful sonnet P-man ...write us all a happy ending. ![]() Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh Parker, this is a beautiful sonnet to your sweetheart for Valentine's Day! Hope it all works out for the both of you! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I'm yours! hehehe, seriously this is incredible writing! Who could resist a romantic guy like you?! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
P, Take the sonnet with you when you go to claim the kiss, it's a heart softener for sure. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- This is beautiful, my friend. ![]() I have a feeling your Valentine will be waiting with open arms, and plenty of kisses. How could she not? ![]() Happy Valentine's Day to you.. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know that your sweetheart is going to love this forever, this is a gorgeous sonnet! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well done-- hope you have a nice valentines day |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well, if she doesn’t say yes to being your valentine with this beautiful sonnet, then she’s a fool. And, somehow, I don’t think she’s a fool. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Parker...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, thank you. Silver Streak, thanks. Janet, we'll see after Feb what happens. Cross your fingers. ![]() Nancy, thank you. RosePetal, hmmmm thanks for the offer. ![]() Kethry, thank you I will do that. Vicky, thank you... and I hope so... well atleast chocolates. ![]() Noah, thanks as always. Jamie, thanks. Tracey, fool no.... thanks. James, thanks. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
![]() just look for me..i'll be the one looking lost, with 'loves fool' tattooed on my forehead.... ![]() love your heart...cant help it.... ![]() ![]() ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Park! I hope she will be yours! Cor |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* it was so wonderful to watch everyone receiving such beautiful things for valentines...I am sure her heart melted to read this soft and loving poem...maybe next year I too will get love for Valentines...**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (02-17-2002 01:34 PM).] |
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