Open Poetry #19 |
Four ages of man |
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Four ages A child I am. New born to the sun! Happily at play I ran. Life had just begun. And new love is sweet, As her smooth arms and mine Encircled, and intertwined , Clasp and meet. And middle life is bold. Not callow youth , nor yet old. With strength and purpose make my way. In proud dominion holding sway. And now life is old. Pallid ,shaking ,timorous cold. Racked ,limp and short of breath. Confront our end,but: T'is only death. arthur |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a good way to tell it...I believe that death is a new birth so that is what I will look forward to someday...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Arthur,this is very good.Enjoyed. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Arthur, This is very well done, showing the full circle of life. Enjoyed much. ~Hugs across the pond, Nancy~ I don't think everyone had a chance to see, and appreciate this so we shall give it a little bump! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, I too believe there is an aftermath and the spirit of the child is in all of us always! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Arthur, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've completed the circle very well... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
when I read poems like this I prompted to imagining other verses which would slow down the process..lol..nice write |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Well done, Arthur...I guess that men have seasons to their lives...just as women do. I wrote one like this but it was about women. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Oh! Arthur see you in heaven. monique |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
arthur, I agree with Startime. A seed must die before and new tree can grow. I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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