Open Poetry #19 |
How could I stop loving you? |
Bella New Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 6Ohio |
and so I'm waking up now from the tangled and hazy mess that has been me I'm searching for spring and a new sun a new place to breathe in and here are you an attachment to my side a permanent fixture how I've grown with you but regressed to a place that is tired and worn- (the one piece of me I won't let you know) how do I go when so much of you has been here weaved in me how do I let go of hands that always offer themselves but most importantly the thought that hangs over me in these long, new nights... how could I stop loving you? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What a wonderful piece to offer as your entree to Passions... It's nice to welcome you to our poetic home. You'll love it here. Settle in and enjoy.... and check your email for a special greeting... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Never an easy question, I enjoyed your ponder! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
welcome to poetry land! I'm certain you will love it here and find inspiration in many of the poets Nice poem! RP |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome Bella... If this is a true-to-life piece, I know how this feels..I'm going through it right now... hugs to you, will be watching for more from you.. K |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bella, welcome to these blue pages. I really enjoyed your poem, and especially this: "I'm searching for spring and a new sun a new place to breathe in" |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's easy..... .... you don't..... beautiful writing! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to a whole new World, Bella! I look forward to more of your poetry. Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful First Post! I look forward to seeing more of your work here. ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, So that you won't ever forget me~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-17-2002 01:56 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions and I truly enjoyed your entrance..looking forward to read more Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions and i really enjoyed your words..looking forward to reading more poems from you.. ~Victoria~ "Silence is a friend who |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a marvelous first post, may you forever find true loves happiness in your heart! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jennie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2002 12:18 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bella - haunting questions asked in this write. welcome to PIP, and hope to see more of your writings... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Bella, this is a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Welcome to Passions...this poem comes from your heart and touched me...Beautiful...I don't think we ever stop loving someone once we have given our love...we just sometimes are forced to move on....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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