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No Coins in the Fountain
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No Coins in the Fountain |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
They cleaned the fountain, Taking the pennies and dimes, Letting out water It stood there empty and dry, All the wishes now removed. Gloom |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you have inspired me greatly  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My granddaughter would go  , as she goes to make sure her wishes are still there and adds more! I wish on stars it is safer! ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice piece Gloom... tight and open ended enough in metaphor for the reader to draw as they would from it... Very enjoyable read.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Professor The movie, Three Coins in a Fountain...I loved as a youth..but, sad to say, I see now that romance is more like your fountain most of the time. Enjoyed this! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my gosh do I like this!! Into my library this short, fantastic one goes. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Gloom "They cleaned the fountain, Taking the pennies and dimes, Letting out water It stood there empty and dry, All the wishes now removed." May I add: They took the coins, Put in fresh clear water To once more call the wishers And spent the coins on needy people. And made their wishes come true. ((Gloom)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice gloom,coins for wishes, wishes gone. floria Floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well concieved and I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* dear man, the wishes aren't gone they have just all come true and now there will be room for many more wishes in the fountain..I hope one of them comes true for you...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Aszard, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! (sigh) Always make a wish and hold it close to your heart, sweet friend, for if you hold onto each one, they will come true for you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
good job my friend..... wonder where all the wishes really do go......not the money... the wishes |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Gloom - The taking or quelling of someones wishes, their hopes, is captured very well with this write. Well done. Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gloom, I have to believe that all those wishes came true.... I just have to BELIEVE. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Much wisdom here  I love it. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, all, I appreciate the kind words each of you give to me. Gloom |
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