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A Flute Duet
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A Flute Duet |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I remember the whisper of your kiss in my mind how our lips did play strings of my heart, they reminisce a flute duet, in our private parquet Fingers danced to rhythm of lovers songs they waltzed with a graceful caress I wore you close like a silk sarong lips played my shoulder with soft finesse Drums of our hearts beat an encore as cymbals splashed over our skin skillful waves' played moonlight shores ebony, ivory, and violins I remember the whisper of your kiss the sheet music of yesterday I miss "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-15-2002 11:59 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
 I love the beautiful music of this poem, Victoria. I think you can take the most mundane topics and make them beautiful. Drums of our hearts beat an encore as cymbals splashed over our skin skillful waves' played moonlight shores ebony, ivory, and violins Just beautiful! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I remember the whisper of your kiss the sheet music of yesterday I miss Your words are like a recital a melody that stands out and plays over and over in my mind. Bravo!!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: sensual, soft, lovely! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
madame dear...nice of you to say..those kind of responses keep me going ha..hugss Ms. Serenade..thank you..i hope one day i dont run out of words ha..  thank you so muchthank you very much doreen..glad you enjoyed.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Drums of our hearts beat an encore as cymbals splashed over our skin skillful waves' played moonlight shores ebony, ivory, and violins I remember the whisper of your kiss the sheet music of yesterday I miss",   (sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...such sweet symphonies of love fill your words, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing to our hearts! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2002 01:47 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a gorgeous musical score. The imagery is like a whisper and a gentle touch. "I wore you close like a silk sarong lips played my shoulder with soft finesse" Wow, that feels so nice! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you noah.. thank you midnitesun..im pleased you enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - this poem sings a melody from you through your pen.. Lovely it is... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump*  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Bill...and thank you for visiting thank you larry for bumping me ha.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you vandana...hugs...and for peeking in today... ~Vic |
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