Open Poetry #19 |
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It Takes Two An old challenge |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
~ It Takes Two ~ An old challenge One hand alone can’t clap in time It takes two to find the beat in rhyme One leg can’t dance without its pair Two legs will prance like Fred Astair One lip isn’t any use without its mate It takes two to kiss at the garden gate Two eyes to see the stunning sight One eye alone might miss the light Two arms can hold you tenderly One arm is used quite casually One on it’s own can love that’s true But nothing beats the love of two Two lips will make the smile complete To show the joy when souls do meet It takes two to make the night-time sing Two hearts together simply ring Two singers’ voices blending perfectly Fills the heart and soul with sympathy There’s nothing like the sound divine Of hearts beating in perfect time One heart alone can’t soar so high Two souls together will surely fly It takes two to stir heat such as this Two mouths to meet in passions’ kiss Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Two singers’ voices blending perfectly Fills the heart and soul with sympathy There’s nothing like the sound divine Of hearts beating in perfect time One heart alone can’t soar so high Two souls together will surely fly It takes two to stir heat such as this Two mouths to meet in passions’ kiss" ![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, it always takes two and your gorgeous words of love always make the magic of romance come alive! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love forever embrace in loves happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is an outstanding poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Marsha!! Absolutely perfect!! ~Hugs to you Mushy Girl,...Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember when your lines skimmed from edge to edge of the frame and now, now you are so well within the lines of brevity and in that, saying so much more... I am so Proud of you! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, first...AWESOME.... Second...I have to agree with Sunshine.... Superbly done girl... |
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