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C ing is believing ( Sven's challenge)
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C ing is believing ( Sven's challenge) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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awaiting my letters... C Cantankerous crows cackling cadence caught caretakers cankerous candor causing caddies catalytic converters colorless chemicals, choking canine captured, caged, clinic confined, collapsing, confirming cause: coronary. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-28-2002 05:31 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A very fine job Done within the limitations It’s difficult to keep to one letter and make it flow, You did it well Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Professor for reading and responding. I enjoy challenges. *s M |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is excellent!!! well done with flow and keeping the thought alive. . . great job!!  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Fine job but a bit overloaded on a couple of lines I think..like the one with the canines. I couldn't do better  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
C lever write....Like it very much Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Maureen! Gee, I don't know if I want to try..they all look so difficult. Challenge well met! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
contagious clapping continues Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Counting Colorado Crows BRAVO!!! ANOTHER WONDERFUL REPLY, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS EXCELLENT!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always amaze me with a smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! You did a marvelous job on this challenge. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
COOL!!! I tried to get in on this one too but I came home too late to chose a number... sorry,,,, I don't want the Q anyone. very well written. Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven thank you..I didn't know what letters I would be assigned so I chose all the remaining ones and worked some up..*s (must have been bored huh )*s I was trying to have one continuous thought or sentence...although very run on!! ecrivan well I am glad you decided to try them..I looked at others and had opinions too but decided they knew what they were trying to get across.. Charisma C lever answer *s thanks Nancy, they were fun. *s Try it you might like it. Interloper oh the Dr is in..or is he..I still have that side door waiting.. Noah, you are too nice *s but thanks SmartChick ..thank you very much *s Magicmystery ..I didn't want the Q or Z or Y either *s Thank you, Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Maureen, I think you did this well. I did not realize we were assigned a letter. So I just took L and ran with it. Oops. Anyway this was fun, hm? Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very cute, Maureen.....challenge well met! (( hugggsssss ))  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra, Was fun no matter how you chose a letter..almost made me want to do one for every letter...NOT!! would have driven me more crazy than I already am *s thanks M Lyra, challenges are fun...some of them I can handle *s thanks }}}hugs{{{ M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-06-2002 06:54 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! Maureen, you are fantastic! ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Newell, you flatter me *s hugs M |
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