Open Poetry #19 |
Response Poem to e.e. cummings's "Poem, or Beauty Hurts Mr. Vinal" ...for class |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Scroll down to the bottom of this link for a poorly punctuated and spaced copy of the original, the only one I could find stole it from you mister preach it my country, still the same, land of Inter Net Banner and Double Your Fun With A Million Things (to do land of a Never Close and Ted Turner) of you i whine:land of Affirmative Action and Drug Company Law Suit, land about FBI Warning- from every DVD let freedom ring all men. i must say pro-abortion, amongst the un -beleaguered and otherwise stinking .... which i can say (On TV) as its been okayed to do that and this off beat lou read. i would copyright trademark patent rhymes, like Gillette Mach 3 shaving with the grain since 1922! what a year of Honing Of The Poetics (Case in point i believe you, “Poem, or Beauty Hurts Mr. Vinal” miserable prophet amidst the coffins these vulture bio-violinists neroing down among my and your twin towers-Rossana Podesta and Elizabeth Taylor were Just Too Good For Their Parts, The lock upon my garden gate's a snail, that's what it is. First there is a mountain, then there is no mountain, then there is. In his whatthe....??? i don’t get it!) well that’s ok too all those homegrown mockingbirds Art is a Whore of Life! a formula one:example, Race Your Car Into A Wall and If It Isn’t A Martyr It Isn’t A Hero therefore my cast of Friends let us now sing each and all half-acidly A- mer i ca, how are You. Don’t you know i’m your native son,like all of you goody-got-the goods delicate situation (Bobbit) insert male tab into female slot--ugly Paxilpushing- disenchanted-bluepillbleeding-Get Back I’m A Scientist americans (who ten-to-one and with upward remodeled eyes,it still hurts but i’m still here,convulsing,now upon another episode of Days of our lives --how smugly let out a tiny premeditative excuse me:What stinks? ozone. anything less would be uncivilized |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Far reaching and wayout of my league! Hope you make the grade with this one! check mark! I'll bet your teacher just loves you!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Pretty 'wayout' Walt! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done!!! being the cummings nut that I am. . . this is a great response to the original. . . it's the right style, the right tone, and the right flow. . . one that's updated for our times now. . . but, perhaps it's not the time that's changed. . . only the names. . . great job walt. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks all and thanks Sven for being able to apreciate what the heck I am talkin bout |
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