Open Poetry #19 |
skater |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
etch for me on the frozen parchment the story of your life not in an axel or a lutz but in lines and curves the movements of your soul and when the cheering is done the tears are shed and the medals won or lost let me look at the lines and curves to see your life ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwww...I love ice skating therefore how could I resist your words *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, I'm afraid my life would not take on gracious lines and curves, but rather triple toe loops and spins! I do wish for lovely lines and curves to show my life's path....but alas..the music has been too fast. Love this one....I sure do! ~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Sven...it is the more subtle and graceful things that we all enjoy for a very long time...Nicely said Sir... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, the magic of ice skating is wonderfully portrayed...I will watch from the sidelines. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wow Sven, This is very cool. I love the idea and thoughts behind it! I'm impressed! ~Sheri |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love figure skating and this is a graceful metaphor to fit this beautiful poem perfectly! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words always brighten up my day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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