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Angel in a Raindrop (a true story
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Angel in a Raindrop (a true story |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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Angel in a Raindrop by Michael Three thousand miles, before it fell, a special drop of rain that day. I held it in my hand in awe and could not think of words to say. An angel, within drop of rain, a miracle, before my eyes, said, “I am here to ease your pain, to soothe your hurt, to hush your cries.” Within my hand, she whispered words, “Please know you’ll never be alone, for I have seen a friend of yours. She says, a part of her, you own. “ “You have a place within her heart. She loves you more than you could know.” I listened as she spoke to me and watched her tiny figure glow. She spread her wings, as if to fly. I asked if she would stay with me. She turned and said, “I’ll never leave, for brighter days you are to see. “ I placed her on my writing desk, picked up my pen, that I might write. Through drop of rain, she touched my hand. The darkness in my life, was light. I penned this poem to tell you all that miracles do still exist. One day, an angel drop of rain, may fall, if you do not resist. Michael Auguste~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was pretty, Micheal.  I love the thought of Angels being with us when we don't realize it. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, this brought a tear to my eye reading this to feel the sensitive imagery! (big hugggsssssss) I too have these kind of feelings sometimes whgere I can't decide if these are just voices of things I've never seen or if they are actually really whispering to my heart! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, always hold these words true to your heart for she will always love you so much forever and ever, just as I know you always will! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I'm adding this to my library because it's outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Auguste - I really liked the idea of the angel coming down in a raindrop. Very creative and very good. Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Michael, I have to agree with Dave. I love the idea you presented here . I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey everyone, guess what? It isn't made up....he really does have an angel in a drop of rain I swear it... Michael, I love this....my smile is so huge....it's perfect  [This message has been edited by SEA (03-03-2002 12:17 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--Very beautiful, the thought gave me good feelings..and I'm so glad it is real. You deserve many raindrops. Hugs! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Michael, It must be an Angel kind of day...but I loved the imagery in this. If Angels can reside in raindrops can they also reside in tears? If so I think I have an army of them hiding behind my eyelids. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is full of sensitive and beautiful imagery! May the Angel never, ever leave you and may she come to us too one beautiful rainy day! Neha |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I believe in angels Auguste, and I will take all the angels drops I can get. This is so beautifully expressed, I beleive you really saw her. floria Floria |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
he really does have an Angel, within a drop of rain I know....  maybe he'll tell you about it further...... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Three thousand miles, before it fell, a special drop of rain that day. I held it in my hand in awe and could not think of words to say. An angel, within drop of rain, a miracle, before my eyes, said, “I am here to ease your pain, to soothe your hurt, to hush your cries.” . . . I penned this poem to tell you all that miracles do still exist. One day, an angel drop of rain, may fall, if you do not resist --------------- Oh...I won't resist.. if she would just insist on coming my way and lighting up my day --------- Oh, such a really wonderful piece that made me smile despite of my gloomy mood. So thank you soooooo much.... & I hope it would come my way soon... Would you tell her, please? Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Michael and I do believe there are angels all around us. Please tell us more some time. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
hi Jennifer, Yes, I've had experience with angels so I know they exist and keep an eye on us. *S* Thank you Noah, thank you and very sincerely. I'm honored that you would put this in your library.*S* Just so you know, this angel is very real, my friend. Dave, Thank you! She really is in a raindrop. I promise! *S* Thank you, Tara. I love seeing your posts on my work. *S* Susan, You don't know how happy it makes me knowing that you enjoyed this. Thank you! Still, I'm not sure I'll be able to convince everyone that it's true and not just something I made up. *wink* (((hugs))) James, You certainly are a man of few words, but they're always kind and most appreciated. *S* Thank you! Martie, I think everyone deserves an angel in a drop of rain. Open your heart and believe. Yes, she's real. *S* Thank you! Kethry, You're very sweet. Yes, in tears and also in dewdrops. Look close and you might see one. *S* Thank you! Neha, She promised not to leave and I truly believe her. *S* I hope you also find an angel. Thanks! Floria, I'm looking at her right now as I write. *S* Do believe, my friend. Thank you! Susan, No, I can't give away how my angel arrived, but I will ask that others look more closely the next time it rains. Thank you, sweet friend. (((hugs))) MyEnchanted_Melody, If I caused I single smile with this poem then it was worth posting. Thank you much! Yes, I'll tell her. *S* Nancy, Yes, they're all around us. Sometimes our friends are so like angels in the blessing they friendship becomes. Thank you dearly! *S* Michael Auguste~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok Michael, just knowing that she is real is enough maybe one of these times you'll tell the whole story (((hugs))) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Michael this is amazing, and especially if it is true. I wish she would come visit me soon, I sure need an angel in my life. Sandra |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
I believe in angels. I even believe they may walk among us. this was a beautiful poem. Lia  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words michael..read it twice..and enjoyed twice... ~Victoria~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, Nope, not telling the "whole" story, as it's personal. *wink* (((hugs))) Sandra, You already have many angels in your life. Start counting your friends and think of how much each one cares about you. *S* Thank you Lia, Angels do exist. I could tell you a story that would simply amaze you. Thanks for reading and your nice comments. *S* Victoria, Thank you much, my friend. *S* *hugs* Michael Auguste~ |
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