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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
How can I scream with just paper and pen? How can my silence burn the fiend within? When it comes to me... This could be a fad. How do I deal without stabbing the notepad? How can I let you see the volume of a silent scream? How do I rage without indulging my fists? How dare I sing with dischordant lyrics? How do I cry without eyeing my wrists? How do I keep venting with ink? How do I hold back salt water grief? How do I scream without being seen as more offensive than I feel I must be. [This message has been edited by Daemonyin (03-03-2002 06:14 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dade, answer into the pillow and often. Strong and angry write. I understand. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How do I keep venting with ink? How do I hold back salt water grief? Liked those lines alot! And I can identify with the rage! Or was that a fad?  Nice to read you~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How can I let you see the volume of a silent scream? ================================= You just did with this powerful aching write. These expressions touch places deep...write it out, scream with your pen, its your soul's voice, and when its written this honestly and constructively it wont offend. Good to see your name here again. jm Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Dade, this is such a powerful and anguishing write, sweet friend, always write out how you feel, for we are all here for you and to get the burdens off our shoulders promises relief in the end! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dade, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You just did. Continue to write it out. Powerful write here...well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
Thank you I appreciate your replys more than you know. |
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