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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-02 06:40 PM

Unlock

you touched my soul
then walked away
within this ache
no words to say
should be different
what did I not try
I’ll hold my end
if you want to tie
open all doors
just for you
if you unlock
and open too
a friendship rebuilt
as it should be
I’ll hold the door
you have the key

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-03-02 06:54 PM

So simply said....but with a volume of
meaning and feelings...Excellent Helen

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-03-02 07:09 PM

I wish this were true.

Great poem.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-02 07:13 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, sometimes friendships can be broken but if we can setlle our differences always, friendships can always be rebuilt! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-03-02 07:13 PM

I couldn't have said it better myself. Perfect.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-03-03 10:30 AM

liked it

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-03-03 02:22 PM

"I'll hold the door, you have the key"
that kind of says it all doesn't it? great write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-03 03:21 PM

very nicely done, I have tried, left the door open, but there are times that it is best to lock it for good.
M

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-03-03 04:27 PM

Sometimes we are not given the choice to keep the door open. Often others slam it and lock it before we even get a chance to say anything. It's a shame, but perhaps for the best. Nicely done, Helen.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2002-03-03 05:08 PM

Helen, a very simple request...and very well put...thank you!

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