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Wanderlust
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Wanderlust I’ve touched my toes in southern seas And froze my nose in mountains freeze I’ve railed and shipped and drove and flew As far as any man I knew. I’ve talked to every type of man Listened to every type of plan. And lived a little of each one As time allowed till I was done. I’ve done some things I think were good In how and what I understood. But never have I met a man That lived his life without a plan. And now I’ve come to think on mine And here I’ve had to draw the line. I cannot pick the bad from good It’s all in how it’s understood. It seems a circle in partial bend A circle with and without an end |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, it's a good poem, but what is the last line meant to say? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, To me eternity seems to be a circle. Even change sings the same song. It's in the abyss have a look, but don't fall in. LOL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, so enjoyed the convolution of it all circle of change well done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, You don't write like a stranger. LOL Thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And now I've come to think on mine And here I've had to draw the line. I cannot pick the bad from good It's all in how it's understood. ======================================= I just love the attitude and latitude of this me Stinkylove .... you take us to higher planes when we read between your lines. Very cool write... a poetic positive point of view.... sorta like asking is the cup is half empty or half full? Full of course...with raspberry tea!!  And? I've got 2 straws *L* Happy Valentines Day me sweet Sy-babes   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And 365 of them to you my Tinkerbell. You read me like a book and I hope you never stop. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A circle with and end? Interesting thought, but I dunno. Love the idea of your work, Sy  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In the understand of plan befits the life of "just a man" who doesn't hold the mirror close yet he waxes quite verbose He allows the need for each seed to sow along and without greed he shares his wit and wisdom real allowing us to feel his feel And in his circle of all content I would allow, he's Heaven Sent... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Glad you enjoyed. Sunshine, Your poetry is superb. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this theme also. Its something to contemplate. So have you stopped wandering? Happy V. Day Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Not yet and a for you on V day.[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-14-2002 12:31 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!What a wonderful way to put it...It is all in how we view it...Magnificent...I pray that I never stop wandering for when I do life will become boring...*giggling* **big hugs** HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, DEAR MAN Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, And a happy Valentine day to you. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour, very nice write, a Happy Valentines day to you. floria Floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very good, Sy.....I don't know if you knew this but when Jewish people get married, their wedding rings are supposed to be plain gold bands without anything etched on them or anything interrupting the solidness of the ring because the uninterrupted ring symbolizes eternity.  It sounds like you have a plan to live eternally.....Now, thats a good plan, but you will get to be awfully OLD if you live that long. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
It seems a circle in partial bend A circle with and without an end ----------------------------------- beautiful words here, Seymour dear, i think it's we who make our simple life a complicated one and then wonder why... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, And you too. Madame C, That's true and thank you. Amigo, I agree, thank you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis cyclical indeed... and now it's time to dip your toes in the northern seas...how kewl is that??...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Very |
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