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Jesse Jaymz
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Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2002-02-14 08:53 PM


hi yall
i posted this last year.tiss a sad day for me and this poem still convays how i feel right now.tell me what you think.

To My Valentine

I would hold you and kiss you
never let you go
i would wine you and dine you
my love for you i would show
wrap you up in passion
my arms pull you tight
then i look into your eyes
they sparkle like diamonds in the moonlight
i have seen the blueridge mountians
i have seen the southern skys
but nothing matches the beauty
of when i look into your eyes
you hair is softer then any silk
that they could make in the far east
you skin is like rosepetals
a vision upon which i feast
and the most beautiful thing i see in you
is that loving and caring heart
the thing i fell in love with
from the very start
so on this day love
i proclaim my love for you
you are always in my heart
no matter what i say or do
if you ever need me
no matter where you are
all you got to do is close your eyes
and poof there we are
on that south carolina beach
together hand and hand
walking inbetween the wistful waves
just you, me and the sand
you deserve only the best
a heart like yours is rare
when ever i am in your graceful presence
all i can so is stare
at the angel that the lord has put before me
at the heart that i long to touch
to whisper into your ear
i love you so much
i would hold you forever
untill the end of time
i would do all these things
i just wish you were mine...

Jesse C. Jaymz

I've always been crazy, but its kept me from going insane

© Copyright 2002 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-14 08:58 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssssss) HAPPY VALENTINES DAY, WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH, may your sweetheart come to your heart and forever fill you with happiness you deserve so so much! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jesse, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-14 08:59 PM


Awww Jesse! This is really heartfelt!
Everyone deserves to be happy today with a true love! You make my heart beat like crazy with your sincere words. I'm sorry that your valentine got away but in time you will find a new one!

Victoria
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3 posted 2002-02-14 09:15 PM


happy valentines day jesse enjoyed your words as always..hugs

              ~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-02-14 10:51 PM


Jesse - nice to see you back. Hope you are doing well. Loved these words of yours... Wanted you to know that your Angel song inspired me to write one similiar to it. Thank you for the inspiration...

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (02-14-2002 10:55 PM).]

Tracey
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5 posted 2002-02-14 11:08 PM


A beautiful poem of love, straight from your heart. I sure do wish every love story could have a happy ending though. *hugs*. Hope your recovery is going well. Nice to see you back on these pages.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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