Open Poetry #19 |
Taste The Flame |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Taste The Flame Heated skin in passions blaze Firestorm in sensual maze Seer the soul with fire’s touch With this heat you want so much Touch the flame burning bright Lead you into fire’s night Don’t ask for why or how Give into your need right now Take a step into this flame Taste the heat learn its name Reach with the whole of you Do what you have to do This is your time and place Time to let the fire race In your blood in your veins Nothing but passions flames Heated breath touching you Feel the fire passing through Leaves you hot leaves you this Tasting only passions kiss Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh wow, Marsha. I love the title, I love the poem, I love the drama! Nan |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!HOT!!!HOT....IT SIZZLES WITH PASSION... I LOVE IT, MUSHY....I LOVE IT...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully and sensually hot, Marsha... Wow!!! I think I burned myself on this one. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
uh huh.... do we need to call the fire department in?? Sounds like someone could get a blistered lip from such a kiss Very nicely done Marsha.. nice drama, nice sensual excitement... I enjoyed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...I thought this had something to do with a kiss...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marsha - yikes! This one's steamin'...liked it alot. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is very sensual, sweet friend, someone call the fire department! (giggles in delight) This is very passionately beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mushy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! My kinda poem ~*~ please call the firehouse mushy has unleashed her love and stoked passion's fire Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (02-28-2002 03:19 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
warm in here isn't it...maybe to hot for my bllod pressure..hehe, good show Marsha |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha... Wow girl, are you trying to burn up the computers around here or what ;-) this is some majorily HOT stuff and me likes it very much!! WOoooHooo you got some passion going on here! this is just amazing and I hung onto every line! Take care and keep up the great work sis! I love you.... Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marsha...I see the full moon got to you too.. NICE WARRRRMMMMM poem....whewwwwww.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha The passion and heat in this sensual piece of writing nearly sent my computer screen into meltdown! You weaved your words of love and desire so very well. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Marsha, this is one of your best. I loved it. floria Floria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Oooh Marsha, I like. Very passionate write. I think I am going to stick my tongue out over the stove and turn it on. You know, the same one where the tea kettle has been for over two months now.lol Dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Oh great! Now we're sharing passionate poetry with our children. ROTFLMAO Okay...she's your daughter! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O Marsha, darling girl, what have you done to me? As I streak through your heavens all I can think of is: My skin has melted into gas A fiery flame from Passion's lass Sensual streams of hot red darts Has blown the valves within my heart. And now I yearn to burn in fire Explode in lightning, your desire A blaze of passion through the night Two spirits, one, in white-hot light. So darling open wide your soul I'm on my way into your whole There'll never be a hotter mass Than vapor glowing from our blast. As you and I dissolve in smoke Incendiary burning coke Soaring beyond all heavens, far Creating birth, a brand new star. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! Your poetry just gets better and better and hotter and hotter And I love it. And I love you, darling Mushy. xo ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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