Open Poetry #19 |
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Choose from Any |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Choose from Any I am one of many A character of line Sometimes I am dull and flat Passion, unrefined… Then a poet takes a pen And whips me a desire That is when I in bend Begin to light the fire I become a syllable, Then lent an adjective I begin a storied verse Then begin to live For I am of the alphabet Alone, I am not much But if you shall give me wing Then a heart I’ll touch Start with any language And scribble me astray For if left on whitest page I shall surely stay Let your ink leak liquid Let your verses flow Take my many characters Allow your heart to show Imagination! Take over, From mountain peak to vale Let the words ring louder Give the billows sail! Start each wondrous day anew Share with every one your view Spread the shimmering drop of dew Share emphatic, “I love you” For I am of the alphabet Alone, I am not much But if you shall give me wing Then a heart you’ll touch ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 3 March 2002 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s yes you are one of many but also "one of a kind" M |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Karilea ... wondrous how together, they combine and intertwine to create beautiful sentiments such as this. Just lovely. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BRAVO Karilea! Wonderful write!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
kj...THIS is superb...love how you built the word...certainly this does form the words of poetry... |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done sunshine..amazing what we can do with those letters..and especially the adjectives...enjoyed very much ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A..+ ![]() |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karilea this is tremendous. A wonderful tribute to poets and oh,,soooooo beautifully written. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea....now here's one I really enjoyed with my morning coffee!! ![]() Have a good day! Write on! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Start each wondrous day anew Share with every one your view Spread the shimmering drop of dew Share emphatic, "I love you" For I am of the alphabet Alone, I am not much But if you shall give me wing Then a heart you'll touch ========================== I'll pick S ..for Sunshine ![]() or perhaps P for Poetess ... but then -- S already covered that ![]() Dont walk before me, lord knows I cant follow |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And when you give it wing It flys so very high Each poem I read of yours Ends with a sigh ~ ![]() ~* If I made you "feel" something today, I have done my job, and I smile *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-03-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Only a few letter..but you have turned them into a jewel! You poet dear, are marvelous! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You, my friend, are never 'dull and flat' - how one can write such beauty about something like the alphabet is beyond me...still, and always, learning from you... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Imagination! Take over, From mountain peak to vale Let the words ring louder Give the billows sail! Start each wondrous day anew Share with every one your view Spread the shimmering drop of dew Share emphatic, “I love you” For I am of the alphabet Alone, I am not much But if you shall give me wing Then a heart you’ll touch" ![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, I enjoy this so very much, your words always shine with sentiments of emotion and the magic of the alphabet! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
flows. Your style is so refined. keep on shining God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's all in the letters my friend. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
well done!! the alphabet has never sounded so inspiring to me. I loved this. Lia ![]() |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Sunshine! This is awesome! There is a bit of Jewish folklore that says God called the world into being by reciting the (Hebrew alef-bet) alphabet. We call words into being by putting the letters together and you put them together beautifully. You have definitely honored the sacredness of your creative gift. May God continue to bless you so richly! Bridget |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
If I were to choose from any I'd not know where begin So I'll pick the letter F And simply call you friend ![]() |
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