Someone... (Interloper's Challenge)

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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-28 10:30 AM

Someone... Interloper’s Challenge

Someone...to whisper my name
who knows that loves not a game
Eyes where I see passion’s flame
flashing bright as they proclaim

Someone...to walk golden sands
of beaches throughout the lands
Stroll hand in hand making plans
as deep affection expands

Someone...with dreams we can chase
of visions that we’ll embrace
With a smile upon his face
when his fingers my lips trace

Someone...who knows how to think
and shares with me mental link
He won’t from adventure shrink
while from life’s glass we both drink

Someone...burning with desire,
eternal blaze of lust’s fire
From my touch he’ll never tire
giving what we both require

Someone...holding me at night
with soft caress to excite
A need inside he’ll ignite,
making love ‘till morning light

Karen Torbiak 2002 ©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-02-28 10:31 AM

Karen - love this, tells of life and what needs to be shared. Your quite a lady...

BC

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-02-28 10:54 AM

Karen, we have the same wants, don't we?
I like this, well done.
Sandra

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

3 posted 2002-02-28 10:57 AM

Karen
Absolutely beautifully written. If you find him, ask him if he has a brother. Good men are hard to find with all of those qualities.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-02-28 11:06 AM

Karen darling girl oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine poet. You talk about the love the someone sprecial so well, I wish you had someone of your own

I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly beautiful, and your rhyme is divine all the way through

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-02-28 11:12 AM

Karen,
Amen and lots of luck. Well done, enjoyed.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-02-28 12:48 PM

Karen...this is stunningly beautiful...So
many needs expressed....I hope you find him
somewhere in your life... Didn't you get
that clone that was sent weeks ago???

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