{{{I want to close my eyes to see you}}}

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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2002-02-26 08:49 PM

~*~I want to close my eyes to see you ~*~

I want to close my eyes to see you
See you
away from every day’s misery
From noises
That wrap up all my senses
And make me unable to hear
The sounds of you
Coming near
Make me unable to hear
Your steps
Coming close
Unable to guess
The way you chose

I want to close my eyes to see you
Devoid of all fogy smoky colors
That seem to surround your eyes
With sadness that always reaches me
Across the miles

I want to see you
Devoid of all the grays
That have wrapped up the world
Even in midday

See you
Beyond the rays of the sun
That seems to be crying for none
None but we
The ones who weaved up
This painful mystery
And wrote in blood
The chapters of this highly accented misery

I want to see you
Beyond the hazy visions
Of today’s predictions
And tomorrow’s supposed fiction
Beyond the paintings
Drawn with crimson colors
tainted brushes
and weapons surrounding it
framing it

I want to close my eyes
And not see
The ashes on your shoulder
Not know
The painful stories
Written in your folder
But see you
See you
Standing near
And I’d whisper words
you could only hear
Draw your smile
With my own finger
Praying that that smile
Would forever linger
I’d brush away
The ashes you had by day
And pray for rain to fall
To clean you
From all

Oh…
I just want to close my eyes
And just see
The words of me
Written in codes
On your face
Drawn with twinkling looks
In your eyes
A feeling no one could surmise

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* My muse has been silent for so long… I hope that what she has given me now is something that is worthy of your appreciation

Thank you
& special thanks for all those who wondered about me and embraced me with their warm hearts

*********************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (02-26-2002 08:49 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-02-26 09:12 PM

very worthy...so much so that I will place in my library to read over a few times..*s

M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-26 09:24 PM

I'm glad to see you posting again

Your poem drew me in line after line, good stuff! (hugs)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-26 09:41 PM

Hi Melody! I am so happy to see you. This is a beautiful poem, it speaks of so many deep subjects. I hope you are happy , and will be back to stay a while.
Luv
Sandra

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2002-02-27 02:21 PM

Thank you dear Moureen
It's a privilege to choose my poem to be in your library...

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Rose Petal
Thank you so much dear ...
My muse has been awfully quite.
I'm very glad that she finally gave me something worthy

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dearest Sandra
I'm happy and privileged to have your kind friendship...
I do hope I'd be able to spend more time here...

Love & Hugs

Thank you
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-02-27 04:28 PM

the muse has spoken well to you my friend. . . in a wonderful voice. . .

welcome back. . . you have been gone for far too long indeed. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-27 04:38 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...we're all so happy to see you posting aagin, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! (kiss on cheek) May you continue to close your eyes and dream of the most beautiful things, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2002-02-27 05:10 PM

...Sven...

Thank you dear friend..
I'm glad that she did..

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...Noah....

My ever sweet friend..
Thank you for your warm welcome......
I have missed you all ...& hoped that my muse takes pity on me which she finally did.
{{{Hugsss}}}

Thank you all....
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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2002-02-27 05:37 PM

very nice return.... worthy of attention indeed! Nice to see your words again..

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-02-27 07:58 PM

So nice to see your words back after the short holiday our muse took, but I see she rested up and helped you create a beauty in this poem. This was simply lovely.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

10 posted 2002-02-28 04:17 AM

Ron

Thank you dearly...
I'm very glad that you think that way.
And it is surely nice to be in this warm circle again...

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Mysteria

thank you dearest...
I'm really happy that she has spoken well after her terrifying silence...

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2002-02-28 10:45 AM

loved it

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-02-28 10:52 AM

MyEnchantedMelody~
A breathtaking beauty you have *gifted* us with~

'And I’d whisper words
you could only hear
Draw your smile
With my own finger
Praying that that smile
Would forever linger'

Just L O V E L Y ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2002-02-28 12:46 PM

vandana

Thank you so much

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Marge

Thank you sweet friend

I'm very happy to know you loved it...

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