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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-15 10:55 AM

Hold Me With Your Words

Hold Me with your words,
whispered in my ear
Fill the page with you,
make me shed a tear

Touch Me with your thoughts,
share your dreams with me
Make the vision clear,
that we both may see

Show Me who you are,
walk me through your mind
Reveal inner man,
to eyes that were blind

Feel Me in your heart,
matching beat for beat
Rest against your chest,
feeling so complete

Know Me by my words,
written just for you
Honest love I give,
from a heart that’s true

Hold Me with your words,
filled with passion’s fire
Embrace Me in thoughts,
burning with desire

Karen Torbiak 2002

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-02-15 11:34 AM

Karen,
Beautifully said, loved the write.

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-02-15 11:37 AM

You held me with yours

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-15 11:37 AM

I do!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-02-15 12:17 PM

Does anyone ever really know us? I dont think so..can relate to this karen...enjoyed your words as always..hugs

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-02-15 12:19 PM

You write words that inspire the poet to write,
Or the dreamer to want to go to sleep at night.

Gloom

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

6 posted 2002-02-15 12:50 PM

Karen; I am held by the words of your talented pen. I always enjoy your work. Wanda

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-02-15 06:22 PM

Beautiful, Karen.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-15 07:02 PM

Wonderful work here Karen, as always!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-02-15 09:22 PM

Karen...pssssst!!...Whispering...can you hear
me...??...

Excellent, passion filled...beautiful poem..

much enjoyed...thank you...

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

10 posted 2002-02-15 09:23 PM

I love it!

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-02-17 12:58 PM

*bump*

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

12 posted 2002-02-22 02:17 AM

this is .... beautiful
perfection....

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

13 posted 2002-02-22 06:08 AM

Magical words held spellbound
When true heart words are found
Hope

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

14 posted 2002-02-22 08:46 AM

I try, but my words barely hold one to consciousness ... yours on the other hand are beautifully written

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2002-02-22 11:09 AM

Karen - don't know how I missed this one, but here I am. Lovely romantic write from a beautiful warm heart...

BC

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

16 posted 2002-02-22 11:22 AM

Karen the entire poem is wonderful but these words are precious.

"Hold Me with your words"

fantastic love poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

alterego
Member

since 2002-02-23

Posts 113
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

17 posted 2002-02-23 01:30 AM

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

18 posted 2002-02-23 01:58 AM

Startime, this is sooo beautiful!! I so love this one! Great write!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-02-23 10:58 AM

Karen~

Another beauty, and you have such a way of writing romance and love, dreams and wants....I love reading your work....HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-23-2002 10:59 AM).]

marya2
Junior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 36

20 posted 2002-02-23 11:03 AM

enjoyed hon, you a romantic too!

marya

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

21 posted 2002-02-23 05:11 PM

Karen - Such a very good, romantic write, and keeping each line at 5 syllables cannot be easy. Well done.

Dave

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

22 posted 2002-03-12 11:25 PM

I love this! What a wonderful way to incorporate metaphors of love and poetry together

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

23 posted 2002-03-12 11:32 PM

This is very sweet Startime...James

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

24 posted 2002-03-13 07:18 AM

karen,

i loved this very much! a beautiful
write full of touching honesty! glad
to see you are happy and it shows in
your writing!!
take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

25 posted 2002-03-13 09:15 AM

How did I almost miss this?
~*~
I will hold you dear
hold you with my arms and thoughts
any way I can

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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