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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-03-12 04:47 AM

The Paper Was Plain

We write what we view
Although paper is plain
The palettes are worldly
Our emotions the same

The length and breadth
The vastness of oceans
We can all see the blue
When flowing emotions

Having this plain paper
It always gives reasons
Kaleidescope viewing
The colours of seasons

Commencing each day
With emotion one feels
Heart and soul moving
We are constant wheels

With this pen as escort
I’m given no rehearsal
A heart viewing insight
Will become universal

The all weather poetry
Journeys lifes highway
I have no magic touch
Heart writes each day

Hope © 2002

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2002-03-12 05:11 AM

very nice read, short and sweet and easy, flows right along! and the message...brings warmth to me, I like it.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2002-03-12 09:45 AM

I thank you for your equally warm sweet reply and I am pleased you enjoyed the read
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-12 04:58 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe there is nothing more enchanting than looking through the kaleidoscopes of our hearts and writing all the beauty of life before our very eyes! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2002-03-12 06:00 PM

amazing how poetry is bled from the heart to the paper

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-12 06:04 PM

Hope darling girl this is utterly wonderful this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent.

YOU are a very good writer and this proves it.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-03-12 06:26 PM

Hope~

'With this pen as escort
I’m given no rehearsal'

WONDERFUL !
The thoughts come our way only once ... we must grab them and fling them to the page before they scurry on to bathe in another's inkwell~

This is just the greatest~
Thank you ! Thank you !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-03-12 07:35 PM

The all weather poetry
Journeys lifes highway

Hope - I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2002-03-12 07:40 PM

I love everything about this! How beautifully true~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

mutington
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since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

9 posted 2002-03-13 08:16 AM

******** SIMPLY OUTSTANDING !!! **********

These lines were exceptional......

"..With this pen as escort
I’m given no rehearsal.."

As always your talent gleams!!

joyce

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S MEADOWS

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