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51 Syllables On Colour and Scent
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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If you are searching for a rose that is true blue it has no season the pigment needed is not found in any rose will lavender do? you must bend down low on humbled knee to catch scent of an angel face There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ like this very much!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Jamie...Angel Face is my favorite rose..the fragrance is heavenly. I think I'll go out for a sniff..and try that humbled knee thing too...thanks for this. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hey, neat Jamie! one question.. is this one poem? Or seperate haiku? I think perhaps, it could work either way, not sure they seem terribly related though.. (well, or wondurfully, lol.. whichever) Nice read.. Luv, Lynne “One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..” |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
SEA-- I am glad you did! Martie-- You are most welcome,, and thank you! Yu Lan-- They are all related in that they are about roses----The second Haiku is a continuation of the first, and makes no sense without it..(the pigmentation for a blue rose not existing..hence the offer of lavender)-- .. the angel face rose is very low growing, thus you have to bend way down to enjoy it's fragrance.... thanks for reading and asking.. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lovely poem, "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I LOVE the title... not sure about the ? at the end of the second one...I don't know..mind you it adds rhythm if the poem is read as one whole thing as opposed to a collection of haiku. But like I said - you are very good at these dear... hugs J  KIt is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here Jamie! I really liked this one!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jamie~ Angel Face is among my favorite's because of the heavenly scent. I've only to walk into the garden to find the beauty and fragrance of this rose. You've done a wonderful job here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well lookie at what I found here..... They are all very beautiful Jamie but this one is my favourite........... If you are searching for a rose that is true blue it has no season Love it! Maree |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is wonderful, Jamie.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
beautifully done, Jamie... regards, sudhir |
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