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Irish Rose
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0 posted 2001-02-02 08:29 AM


Hope is the last thing to die
And yet, our words live on.
Valiantly, we survive
Epiphanys of pain
Now, we write on.

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis






[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-02-2001).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2001-02-02 11:31 AM


Hi Kathleen...I think it must be hope that keeps many going when all else fails...thank you for this lovely Haven acrostic.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 2001-02-02 11:33 AM


I like it.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-02-02 06:57 PM


Amen!! No critique from me Missy!  
Denise
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4 posted 2001-02-02 09:04 PM


Very well done, Kathleen!
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5 posted 2001-02-03 11:43 AM


Very true. I liked this one!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-02-04 12:42 PM


Kathleen,
I believe it's the first time I've read an acrostic by you (if I recall) anyhow I compliment you on this one...
It's lovely sweetie and I enjoyed this alot...

~coco~

You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-02-05 01:33 PM


Martia, thank you...I feel very passionate about hope at the moment!

Elizabeth: thank you!

Sharon:  oh, I appreciate that. Thank you

Denise:  Thank you and glad to have you as Moderator!

Dopey_Dope:  thanks!

Coco:  Yes, it is, I did one a few weeks ago but it was not my true self, this is more me, I hope. it's my first "real" attempt.
Thank you!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



serenity blaze
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8 posted 2001-02-06 08:22 PM


Perfect...I like watching you have fun with your work!  Nice addition to the Haven.
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-02-07 01:32 PM


Oh Serenity, thank you I'm happy to be here.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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10 posted 2001-02-23 10:48 PM


OMG I love this.....
wonderful write if i may say
thanks for the beautiful read


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-02-23 11:57 PM


Awesome acrostic!! So true, so true.

LW

brian madden
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12 posted 2001-06-02 03:51 PM


Valiantly, we survive
Epiphanys of pain
Now, we write on.


perfectly said.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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13 posted 2001-06-16 07:14 PM


Wow, Kathleen!  This is beautiful.  I loved it.  Nice work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-06-16 07:24 PM


Thankk you!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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