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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hope is the last thing to die And yet, our words live on. Valiantly, we survive Epiphanys of pain Now, we write on. "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Kathleen...I think it must be hope that keeps many going when all else fails...thank you for this lovely Haven acrostic. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like it. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Amen!! No critique from me Missy! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Kathleen! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very true. I liked this one!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kathleen, I believe it's the first time I've read an acrostic by you (if I recall) anyhow I compliment you on this one... It's lovely sweetie and I enjoyed this alot... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Martia, thank you...I feel very passionate about hope at the moment! Elizabeth: thank you! Sharon: oh, I appreciate that. Thank you Denise: Thank you and glad to have you as Moderator! Dopey_Dope: thanks! Coco: Yes, it is, I did one a few weeks ago but it was not my true self, this is more me, I hope. it's my first "real" attempt. Thank you! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perfect...I like watching you have fun with your work! Nice addition to the Haven. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh Serenity, thank you I'm happy to be here. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG I love this..... wonderful write if i may say thanks for the beautiful read So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Awesome acrostic!! So true, so true. LW |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Valiantly, we survive Epiphanys of pain Now, we write on. perfectly said. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Kathleen! This is beautiful. I loved it. Nice work. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thankk you! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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