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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-03-19 11:14 PM

snow5

Sometimes I look at the snow
and hate how it reminds me
of how you and I are so
your lost and I am crazy

other times I am afraid
that it wont snow again
and what's left for me will fade
_Nothing comes out of my pen_

***********another poem

Fall out shelter

maybe after the fall out
I will find some one like me
and we will find some shelter
just not a fall out shelter
I like the big shiny lights
and small spaces get to me

I just thought hiding my self
was a good idea until
I stepped outside the shelter
to see everything gone

Juju

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Martie

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1 posted 2006-03-20 12:08 PM

Juju

Your poems hold an ache that is very tangible when reading...like it was my own.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

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In your dreams

2 posted 2006-03-20 03:29 PM

Thank you martie I appreciate your reply.

-Juju

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Musicmaker1969

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Peterborough, Ontario Canada

3 posted 2006-05-14 02:00 AM

There is an emptiness in your poems. Something you are searching for but have not yet found. It is my prayer that you find what it is you seem to be seeking, even if you don't know you are seeking - it comes through in your poems. I wish you peace and joy and lots of inspiration.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
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4 posted 2006-10-08 10:42 AM

and what's left for me will fade
_Nothing comes out of my pen_

Yes.....but still we try, knowing nothing will express the ache as it really is, and nothing will take it away.

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2006-10-08 01:37 PM

Yes. Funny how crazy life is. That is a really old poem. Fun looking back at my old stuff.
-Juju

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