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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-11-17 09:29 PM



                      day 252

                      billions


                      Witness
                      certain half domes
                      heaving like pale bilious mushrooms
                      about to burst
                      and send their
                      new spoor out to wander streets
                      and likely one day
                      by their unexamined natures
                      find their own saprophytic victims
                      to feed
                      and to swear allegiance to
                      regardless the masses
                      and the stench




[This message has been edited by Krawdad (11-18-2004 09:55 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-11-17 10:18 PM


nice metaphor *sigh*
as I said, I'll continue to read, and reply

all those spores, and nowhere to go but in the muddy trenches

iliana
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2 posted 2005-02-09 01:22 AM


Bravo.  Strong statement!   ....jo
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3 posted 2006-05-14 02:09 AM


I really don't know what else to say other than, well said and well written.  Or, as Julia Roberts said in Pretty Woman, "well done!"

Sheri Adams

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4 posted 2006-10-08 10:38 AM


An exponential curve, until payment due exceeds accounts received....and Darwin is not a god of mercy.

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