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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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close my eyes one last time feel nothing against this wind numb to the world trying to see what i never had its all my mistake i've apoligized.... with my scars, bruises.... they excentuate what i already knew what i live you've left me here fallen on the edge you never cared before i'd give it all back just to have a piece of me be real believe me, i've tried to relive that pain feel the tears stinging at the sound of you laying in the dark i can see only one black color its been my world before you can't see what you've done because you never loved me enough to look no matter what i'll always love you |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing  |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thanks... <3 no matter what i'll always love you |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Whoa, a rather scathing poem this is. I enjoyed it, though I thought the lines were a little disorganized in terms of their lengths at times. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thanks no matter what i'll always love you |
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