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literary despondency

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2004-05-24 04:31 PM

It's no wonder
these
tremors and
miseries persist
in the most
tormenting of ways.
Granulated sugar
wearing away/grinding down
what's left of
your sanity.

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.

To dream is to die.

/jeni/

'Christianity is the complete negation of common sense and sound reason.'
-- Mikhail Bakunin

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (05-24-2004 05:19 PM).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-05-24 04:49 PM

Not long ago I was wondering where you had dissappeared to, it nice to see you here and a pleasure to read you again.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-05-24 05:34 PM

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.

wonderful writing...

M

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-05-24 08:16 PM

Please toss more thoughts this way, more often. I personally have felt like tossing most of my writes into the recycle bin lately. LOL.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2004-06-01 08:52 AM

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.

One of the most outstanding lines I've read in a long time.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2004-06-01 09:00 AM

Wonderful writing

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

6 posted 2004-06-06 06:21 PM

I especially enjoyed the last line of this one. Good write all round.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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