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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-04-24 08:33 PM

Wisp

hands folding in minor
prayer, hoping

fingertips touching
keys

a music to be
born, adrift

to touch eyes, hearts,
souls

flitting,
snowflaking, butterflying, drifts

that

soft,

that

ethereally,

that

one

moment

~*~

thoughts
and
hands

melding

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2004-04-24 09:07 PM

But the wisp is traditionally misleading... isn't it?

Or did you intend that?  I'll read a second time...

~*~*~*~  (sunshiney break)

Alright, on second read, I think I understand you more clearly.  It's about music---ohh!---yeah, it's about music, the charming wisp that flutters magically before us like a ghost, and inspires feelings of longing and escape.

So it's that escape, not necessarily that misleading---

Glad I could solve that for myself.  Thanks for throwing me for a loop, mum---

Brian

http://www.livejournal.com/~new_formalism

Sunshine

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2 posted 2004-04-24 09:17 PM

Almost right, my son....

music

poetry

muse

love

go ahead...touch your fingertips
but for a moment

of electric

in front of the screen
on the screen

and feel
the
moment

~*~

Now...

describe it

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2004-04-24 09:18 PM

Oh I

get it

if I

talk like

this

I'm

brilliant

and I

get it

of course

I could

be wrong

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-04-24 09:53 PM

Now, did I ever say
I am brilliant?

Nope.

LOL...

Hugs....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2004-04-25 10:45 AM

ROTFLMAO at you and LP, loveya both

wisping can be a shocking experience
when I only have one moment to wisp
I try to wisp in this forum

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

6 posted 2004-04-27 12:27 PM

I use "wisp" as a handle on the internet sometimes---

Strange, conicidence? I like misleading people I suppose---and I'm pretty to look at.

Sunshine

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7 posted 2004-04-27 08:47 AM

LOL...I knew that....

both of 'em.

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

8 posted 2004-05-03 02:28 PM

I

love

this

HE

HE

HE

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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9 posted 2004-05-07 11:26 PM

You captured it...the very thing that I have been doing, this very evening. So far without reaching what I seek, but soon...soon, I can feel it. And this will help.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-05-08 09:09 PM

Ed...isn't it neat to know
we're not all that different
after all?

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