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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-05-08 01:06 AM


I am sad about the little cat
I think I’m gonna cry
For you see I have a cat like that
No wait one day she died

I said this too good PDV
Who too was sad for cat
Who lived its life for four cat years
As blind as yucky bat

She offered me an ICQ
Version of embrace
But all I could envision
Was a kitty licking face

Her warmth she extended
And I got a fuzzy feeling
Not as fuzzy as little cat
That thought sent me reeling

Then I began to relate
I was shedding tears no lie
Shedding like a little cat
Oh then I had to cry

Don’t cry brave walt
The poet touched your soul
Write to her or him and say
The little cat has made you whole

Send the poet an email
That’s what you should really do
I’ll send the dog in, out goes the cat
Yakkity yak and boo hoo

The poem that made me sad
“She was just a little cat”
Warmed me so I thank a friend
For giving a needful chat

To the poet who wrote it
A newcomer at P.I.P
The little cat purrs and plays
So our hearts can be set free


She was just a little cat by: Titia Geertman

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-08-2001).]

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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1 posted 2001-05-08 11:26 AM


Walt, I think you have sliped over the edge.  Maybe a hair ball?  But, both were good poems.  ME
Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-08 08:46 PM


Walt, you are just a bit nuts.  Was it me, or was there a light-hearted tone to the poem?  
You sadist you.     Kitties are nice.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-05-09 07:38 PM


You are nuts!!!! LOL

This was good....and I promise not to mention that you were crying your eyes out as you read Titia's poem!!!

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-05-09 08:20 PM


Sad Tita.  Funny Walt.   Joyce
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5 posted 2001-05-13 02:34 PM


*italian accent* Forget about it!
You're crazy walt man, you're crazy!


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