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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-14 10:23 AM



When did the voices begin?
I asked myself
The madness tasting most
delicious
reminding of chocolate
driving to throes of ecstasy
and beyond

Chaos were you not my lover
in another life
when we fornicated ourselves
sprawled naked
over much whine
and thoughts of Dante under glass

The voices
oh the beautiful voices
how they sing to me
dance
scream
tantalizing with visions
seducing with dream
awaking me in a chaotic state
of mental orgasm

Dance with me sirens of madness
partake of my soul
muse of chaos
free me from the gravity
of worldly boundary
and the chains of normalcy

Awaken me to the dawn of mad genius
writing random mystic thoughts
late into the midnight hour
spilling the blood of my soul
on parchment
till I am no more human
I am not man
only a poem still being written.


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WildPoet
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1 posted 2003-11-27 02:05 AM


Thats pretty damn good!

WildPoet

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-29 08:21 AM


thank you
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3 posted 2004-06-07 05:43 PM


This is a brilliant peice of writing, I really enjoyed the read.

Andrew

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