since 2002-11-18Posts 2587
This hour shakes
as if it were to crack
Scatter do the sweeter things
like creatures caught in light
When the burden of wait looms
hungry over such patient shoulders
Writing with guides
straightening the lines
Memory rebellious askew
I give in to the gravity of word
falling from skull to paper
This hour should be over
in unimaginable future
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since 1999-11-09Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden
Gem.. wow. This is... this is something great.
That part just stuck with me... wow. I'm struggling with words today.. too much coffee.
since 2002-10-12Posts 2981
this is awsome. awe-some. phhlt. can't think much else to say
What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
since 2001-02-15Posts 2681
"Scatter do the sweeter things
like creatures caught in light"
- This is wonderful writing, succinct yet beautiful, thanks for sharing.
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