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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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This hour shakes as if it were to crack An afterthought of goodbye Scatter do the sweeter things like creatures caught in light When the burden of wait looms hungry over such patient shoulders Writing with guides straightening the lines Memory rebellious askew I give in to the gravity of word falling from skull to paper This hour should be over in unimaginable future |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Gem.. wow. This is... this is something great. An afterthought of goodbye That part just stuck with me... wow. I'm struggling with words today.. too much coffee. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey gem. this is awsome. awe-some. phhlt. can't think much else to say  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
"Scatter do the sweeter things like creatures caught in light" - This is wonderful writing, succinct yet beautiful, thanks for sharing. Andrew  |
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