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Midnitesun
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Gaia
0 posted 2003-09-27 11:30 AM


I wish to release you
from this prism,
and myself from this
memory prison.
Let your light shine
gloriously
somewhere else, please.
For you have burnt yourself
in neon upon my retinas,
and the glow persists,
even when I beg
for total darkness.  
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-09-27 07:54 PM

I should send this to someone...yes...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958
2 posted 2003-09-27 11:15 PM

Nice short, matter of fact poem.  You express what needs to be said without using any complex diction or description.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-09-27 11:29 PM

thanks Cein, and feel free to send it to anyone you want

fractal! thanks for that reply (PS, read the email I sent)
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