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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-19 02:51 PM




Peggy Sue Sounds, for Serenity


For too long,
harbored, sheltered,
silent slips of sound
floated between
this mind
and air,

for even the scratch of reflection
to rag was to be

undone,

by insecurity.

~*~

I know Isabelle…
she lives within.

~*~

Who will be first
to cast the fury, when all
that will result
is chaos?

~*~

My reflections dim…
but the air…

where it is bluest…

is still the only parchment
for some
strayward moments…


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-09-19 03:17 PM


nodding...

I'm still afraid to let it all out too--and I can't even call it being sheltered!

Hugs you...

today I am too tired to rage.

grin. That should change this evening when the crew comes "home."

love ya you.

And I'm still waiting for a Hurricane called "serenity"---chuckle? *wince* shudder

Local Parasite
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2 posted 2003-09-23 02:32 AM


I like the sky, someone recently taught me to pay more attention to it than I used to and now I count shapes in the clouds and stuff.  Your last little bit in this poem is my favourite because it makes me think of that.

This is sweet of you... yes, all we need is a little bit of parchment to scribble down everything, and then, there's no such thing as isolation or loneliness... just perfect acceptance.

Great writing.  Thanks for sharing it with the Haven.  

Much love,
Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-24 12:39 PM


Karilea:

in this I find such strength
and beauty shining just as your
name so indicates . . .

silent slips of sound
floated between
this mind
and air,

for even the scratch of reflection
to rag was to be

undone,

THAT right there
says everything
Beautiful gift from one
Lady to another
xxoo

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