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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-19 10:50 AM




The lines
are becoming finer

the scarred ones
on my hands

certainly,
those around
the eyes

absolutely
the ones that
are crossed…

so
much
finer…

those defining
my hands,
or eyes…

they

won’t break.



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-09-19 11:04 AM


And some very FINE lines they are, my dear poet. Each of them is a gift.
I want less gifts!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-09-19 12:50 PM


Great to see you in here, Karilea. Those lines are almost a poetry of the skin.
Local Parasite
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
3 posted 2003-09-23 02:26 AM


Every line is just a landmark of experience, of living wisdom and a legacy in process.  It's very much something for you to be proud of, and I'm glad you've written it so.

Beautiful poetry, mom.  Sorry I haven't been reading you so much, school is real time-consuming.  

Read you again soon,
Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-09-24 12:43 PM


and I sit here and wish I only
had one inch of wisdom which resides in such line . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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