Poetic Haven |
In My Skin |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
She has taken to coloring her hands again. Missing the time when she used to color in between the lines. They have all faded away. you are in my skin She's trying to find a way out again. Burrowing blindly has left her craving some reconstruction. Give her lines back to her. I will take back what you stole. She has no fingerprints. Her identity has disappeared with her memory, they went for a stroll. She needs some redirection. i need you out of my skin perhaps I'll finish this later [This message has been edited by Allysa (09-08-2003 09:34 PM).] |
||
© Copyright 2003 Allysa - All Rights Reserved | |||
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Love this, great imagery.. powerful lines.. |
||
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Love the twists in this, and love the thoughts. it makes me feel anxiety, but i like it. Does that make sense? keeping it. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
||
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yeah I'm pretty much with gem on this one If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
||
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooooh... |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |