navwin » Sanctuary » Poetic Haven » In My Skin
Poetic Haven
Post A Reply Post New Topic In My Skin Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Allysa
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2003-09-08 03:15 PM


She has taken to coloring her hands again.

Missing the time when she used to
color in between the lines.

They have all faded away.

you are in my skin

She's trying to find a way out again.

Burrowing blindly has left her
craving some reconstruction.

Give her lines back to her.

I will take back what you stole.

She has no fingerprints.

Her identity has disappeared
with her memory, they went for a stroll.

She needs some redirection.

i need you out of my skin
perhaps I'll finish this later

[This message has been edited by Allysa (09-08-2003 09:34 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Allysa - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-09-08 03:26 PM


Love this, great imagery.. powerful lines..
gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
2 posted 2003-09-08 06:25 PM


Love the twists in this, and love the thoughts. it makes me feel anxiety, but i like it. Does that make sense?

keeping it.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
3 posted 2003-09-12 08:00 PM


yeah I'm pretty much with gem on this one

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

4 posted 2003-09-16 01:20 PM


Ooooh...
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Sanctuary » Poetic Haven » In My Skin

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary