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Looking forward to a future in sales

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-09-05 05:40 PM

He knew just how to say it.
He could take the simplest term
and bury its real meaning

in a fog of axioms,
half-forgotten bands of words
both weak and erudite.

A useless, untrained thought
could be pressed to service
for flotsam and poetics.

Formidable in sound.
None dared grasp to scale
his impenetrable music.

Thus the truth
behind the surface
was denied its syllables.

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I have no idea what just inspired that.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-05 06:18 PM

ha, and you may never know..

Great write, nonetheless..

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-09-05 08:48 PM

Grinning like mad.

I'm not sure if your last comment is intended as ironic self deprecation or not--a component of the work? but that's why I adore reading you...

You always have me shaking my head in admiration and glee.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-09-05 08:51 PM

Sheesh.

I just realized that could have been taken as an insult.

Yanno I love ya mikie--doncha?

I'm trying to be very clear these days...

I think you're brill.

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