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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-29 01:16 AM


In a dream,
I sang sweetly..

Soprano scars
carry
the zephyr.

the tune
whistles

misery


remember les berceaux
les
    berceaux
solo..

charred musical
sheet
edges..

the cradles

i invisioned a lonely fog,
clothing tattered.
infant tear..
mourning..dense
daybreak or shifting moonlight.

nothing but sweet lyric..

zephyr yearning
crumble paper swan..

les berceaux

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1 posted 2003-08-29 12:05 PM


Lullabies to the past. Loved it...
Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2003-09-05 02:26 PM


*bumps this* all by its lonesome..shame...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-09-05 04:41 PM


Meg, not sure if this is what you are describing, if it is , you have done it beautifully . . . yes haunting misery
http://lib1.store.vip.sc5.yahoo.com/lib/recordare/FaurBerc-excerpt.mid


beautiful writing
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 04:49 PM).]

Kaoru
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4 posted 2003-09-05 05:32 PM


You got it!

Beautiful...

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5 posted 2003-09-06 03:32 PM


sigh
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