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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-01 04:43 PM

Electric lights

I

could leave out letters
and let you fill the words

flash battery
show me where you drive

I

deserve more
than torch help by limp arm

tired of shining me the way
drop it then

intuition never helps me to forget
does she?

reliable old fool
never believe what she screams in my face

I

should not worry
when I have more to know.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-09-01 09:06 PM

I know the peices fit...

whatever. yeah..but poking around in the dark is fun too. oh gem..I'd put it in the library, but you are already in there yourself so..you know.

insanity is not a crime

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-02 01:39 AM

dot to dot the i's..

the first line hooked me on.

great, gem, you're just great.

i dig it.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-03 11:04 AM

You sure do, Lady deserve more than this:

I

deserve more
than torch help by limp arm

and instantly what started playing
in my head but
ELO "Don't Bring Me Down"
you must listen, if only once
beautiful pen there gemma
xxoo

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2003-09-03 03:59 PM

I love these lights.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-09-03 09:03 PM

amazing gem

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