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Don't Say this Too Soon..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-27 07:57 PM

You said in your letters
that you could
not wait
for me.

You'd cross
in my shoes
and misunderstand

my loss.

so do
comfort

rest your
cold hands upon
a
once rose cheek.

a muffled voice I
keep you from
saying it too soon.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2003-08-27 10:34 PM

this almost caused tears to well up in my eyes..

nice write.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-28 01:45 AM

I'd agree with alyssa but my tear ducts aren't functioning properly or i'm just back to numb..regardless nice write

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-08-28 10:06 AM

painnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

this reminds me of my own personal moment, i wish i could forget.

you make it real.

damn youre good.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-28 10:55 AM

probably in a very different way than quite intended - this brought tears to these eyes
nice Meg
xxoo

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2003-08-28 01:07 PM

No need to cry, 'cause I see the strength in this.

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