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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-27 07:49 AM



It only takes
one sense making thought

to go back to where you de railed
my motion

won't peddle faster
speed
nauseates me
always has
always will

reminds me of falling

out
of
control

don't want my feet
on the pedals

but hands upon
steering wheel

or is it

the other way

around

deciding which?

I'm tired of

decisions

having them

and
not
.
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-08-27 10:11 AM


I never quote you because its all so good. stop being so good. is it a train or a car or a plane? we'll never know. Liz will sut up now and keep her words to herself

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-08-27 04:15 PM


I know the out of control gig
Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-27 06:26 PM


Ditto, Raffie..

What about a bike built for two..

...really slow people?


Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
4 posted 2003-08-27 09:26 PM


I like to walk.  heh  Though, I've been known to fall UP stairs, so maybe that's not such a good thing?  

I loved this:
"It only takes
one sense making thought

to go back to where you de railed
my motion"

I got a lot out of this poem, I had an image of two people fighting over control of the emotional movement, or depth, of a relationship.  I enjoy the depth, girlie.

Nic

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-08-28 10:53 AM


seems like every day don't it now?
nice gemma
xxoo

to go back to where you de railed
my motion

bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-08-28 01:08 PM


You can even make the wreckage sing. That's talent.
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